That is great descriptive writing Lacee. I love the words you have used, "like long wavy mustache." I also like how you have written that the fire warms his hands. I wonder if you went back and looked at the picture again if you would see anything else?
Kia ora Lacee, You have done an awesome job with your descriptive writing! Description is extremely important in writing because it helps your viewers visualise the story in their heads. Reading the sentence ‘The man is cold at night’ is a little bit bland and boring, but reading that exact same sentence with the descriptions added in makes it sound 10x more exciting! I really like how your writing is describing the image, and I specifically like the sentence ‘An ugly wolf is sitting on the freezing man’. What is it about this image that makes you think the man is freezing? Could the wolf sitting on his head be a hat? Does this man really have a moustache, or is it a part of the wolf? It would be awesome if you could reply to this comment and let me know what you think! You’re doing a fantastic job with your blogging, keep up the great work! Nga mihi
That is great descriptive writing Lacee. I love the words you have used, "like long wavy mustache." I also like how you have written that the fire warms his hands. I wonder if you went back and looked at the picture again if you would see anything else?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Lacee,
ReplyDeleteYou have done an awesome job with your descriptive writing!
Description is extremely important in writing because it helps your viewers visualise the story in their heads.
Reading the sentence ‘The man is cold at night’ is a little bit bland and boring, but reading that exact same sentence with the descriptions added in makes it sound 10x more exciting!
I really like how your writing is describing the image, and I specifically like the sentence ‘An ugly wolf is sitting on the freezing man’.
What is it about this image that makes you think the man is freezing?
Could the wolf sitting on his head be a hat?
Does this man really have a moustache, or is it a part of the wolf?
It would be awesome if you could reply to this comment and let me know what you think!
You’re doing a fantastic job with your blogging, keep up the great work!
Nga mihi
Hello. I think he is cold becas he is trying to blow a fire in his hands and it is dark. I dont think it is a hat but maybe it is. Thankyou
DeleteHi Lacee
ReplyDeleteGreat descriptive writing! What made you choose this picture to describe?
Hi Lacee, thats a awesome picture to describe. You have done a great job and used lots of good descriptive words.
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